I love it…ok a few nit picky things….
1 – you should add a logo to your boxes – a sticker. I will be showing packaging and presentation before we end our 7 days to give you an idea.
2 – tissue – should be wrapped a little better – looks a tiny bit messy
3 – book great – needs to be centered – so you need to slide book to one side when opening
4 – overall its a great first video!!! and this is what helps sell!